R3 Film Trailer - First Draft

Evaluation

There are quite a few things that are good about our first draft but also some things that could be improved and added to make it a better trailer.

What is good about the first draft of your trailer?

I am happy with the shots we have in our first draft as they are of high quality and they look professional and good for our trailer and also the editing of the shots such as the reverse and fast forward also improved the shots and made them look more sci-fi for our trailer so it fits in with the genre well. I like the way the logos came out, they look very professional and we made sure that our company name fit in with the sci-fi genre by going with the name of ‘Shuttle Productions’. I also think some of the music and sound effects used in our trailer work well together and fit in with the shots that we had on the trailer.

What can be improved?

I think that more shots needed to be added into our trailer as at the moment, as we are missing the main narrative it doesn't look much like a trailer but if we add the shots that we need of the main narrative, it will make more sense to our audience and be more structured. The editing could be improved so that it flows better like a trailer does rather than having it look jumbled up and maybe have more varied transitions rather than fade to black. We also definitely need to add more titles as we only have two titles and titles also help structure the trailer better and also help with the narrative of the trailer and it also helps the audience to understand what our trailer is about.